There is nothing misty-eyed about it. As written, it expresses with utmost clarity an existential condition which is itself part and parcel of what humans have always contended with based on their own limited existence attempting to finalize into an unnegatable, non-negotiable truth.BigMike wrote: ↑Wed May 07, 2025 5:21 pmAlexis, I say this with all due respect: if you feel the urge to post poetry—especially this kind of misty-eyed, abstract lamentation—maybe consider Facebook, a personal blog, or even a creative writing forum.Alexis Jacobi wrote: ↑Wed May 07, 2025 5:03 pmMAN with his burning soul
Has but an hour of breath
To build a ship of truth
In which his soul may sail—
Sail on the sea of death,
For death takes toll
Of beauty, courage, youth,
Of all but truth . . .
This is Philosophy Now. The rest of us are trying to have a discussion rooted in arguments, logic, and clarity—not navigate a sea of loosely tethered verse. Save the stanzas for places where they’re the point—not where they derail it.
Humans are a prime example of physics yielding to metaphysics in the discovery of what is termed truth. It's the physics which caused the metaphysical to assert itself in acknowledging the one unavoidable default truth which all are subject to...that everything which is, goes back to nothing. It remains for the metaphysical to intervene and strive for meaning in the cusp between the beginning of awareness and its conclusion.
If your brand of determinism can't accommodate or include that which the poem explicitly states, then it remains fatally flawed and only true by half at best...your version of it being nowhere near complete.
In case I'm not clear, since your reading skills have so often proven to be inferior to your writing skills, determinism does not preempt metaphysics on any level; in fact, cannot be understood without it.