Would you say that nostalgia is more of a belief or...
Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2017 9:35 am
a feeling? For me it's a feeling.
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Is this your own work, Walker, or have you borrowed it from someone else who is under the misapprehension he is a poet.Walker wrote:
Nostalgia is what happens
when truth meets emotions
like bugs meet their maker
on the rosy goggles
of a fast motorcycle ride.
Nostalgia is when
the way we were
is honestly remembered
as could have been
when what was becomes
what should have been.
Being someone with a complete lack of appreciation of poetry, I shouldn't have commented on it. What I said about it was more to do with me being in a grumpy mood than the poem.Greta wrote:Alfie, I liked the imagery of the bug on goggles,
It's like a rap, Greta, and, although I wouldn't know the difference between a good one and a bad one, I've heard worse ones than yours.Do I feel a bad poem coming on?
That is funny and bears the repetition! Still chuckling. My doggerel is heeled.Greta wrote:Alfie, I liked the imagery of the bug on goggles, and also "when what was becomes what should have been".
Then again, I also liked the line in King Crimson's ConstruKction of Light: "And if Warhol's a genius, what am I? A speck of lint on the penis of an alien?" which was roundly lambasted by critics rather more socially sophisticated than me
Do I feel a bad poem coming on?
My goggles are not of rose
I missed the train too often
When I blew up or froze.
So I will go to my coffin, knowing
That the past was sometimes shit
That I liked it a bit.
Not as good as my life today
Which is okay.
Yes, the world is going to hell
Reason hides in its scholarly shell
But history is cyclic
Though our future is seismic.
Things will one day settle again.
The survivors then will start a new reign.
And they will look at the past
Truly aghast
At what dickheads we have been
With a world once green.
So their goggles will be grey, not rose
I suppose.
But no one really knows.
Yes, I too am a bad poet
When I try to do it, I routinely blow it
But no one especially seems to care
Another small voice in the great data nowhere.
Once I get going I struggle to stop
Obsessive, compulsive and over-the-top
The rhymes keep on coming, like Pam Ayers's daggy ditties
Now I'll give it a rest before you people get shitty.
Witty garble from HarbalHarbal wrote:Fantastic! What could be betta than a poem by Greta?
Rants from Dalek? (Shit. I was supposed to rhyme, wasn't I?Greta wrote:Witty garble from HarbalHarbal wrote:Fantastic! What could be betta than a poem by Greta?
It's too hard to rhyme so switch to alliteration ... Dalek's diatribes :)Dalek Prime wrote:Rants from Dalek? (Shit. I was supposed to rhyme, wasn't I? :| )Greta wrote:Witty garble from Harbal :)Harbal wrote:Fantastic! What could be betta than a poem by Greta? :D
Sounds like I messed my pants now.Greta wrote:It's too hard to rhyme so switch to alliteration ... Dalek's diatribesDalek Prime wrote:Rants from Dalek? (Shit. I was supposed to rhyme, wasn't I?Greta wrote: Witty garble from Harbal)