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Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:38 am
by mhoraine
Hi

M: Why tears ? For wasted years ?
P: You'd have to ask them.

M: I'd love to. But what I was interested in was why you saw tears. Someone else might peer and leer and see beer ?
All them oldies having a great old time, tears of laughter at the fretting humans.

P: I think that most of the 'problems' of philosophy are created by philosophers.
M: Hmmm, that's like saying most of the problems of social workers are created by social workers. There will always be questions for philosophers, and social 'issues' for SW's. Sometimes in the clarification of issues, more and more are 'discovered' or 'invented' - OK if it helps. Otherwise aggravating.

M.

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 8:16 am
by Psychonaut
What I mean by most of the problems of philosophy are created by philosophers is that most of the conundrums simply are not conundrums. They exist only in the heads of the delusional.

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 11:26 pm
by Psychonaut
All Ways

In this way we shape the world
by walking tall our souls unfurled
a wellspring pushing at the walls
that houses us stunted to make us fall.
Without an eye to where we go
we release our legs so we may grow
and get to where we're meant to be
become ourselves for us to see
and know with pride that we are
simply this: ourselves gone far
incarnate and within and of this place
winning by dint of having run the race.
Myself unbound at last by itself
in order to garner some sense of health.
No more trepidation in the face of 'them'
the rot cut out straight at the stem.
When voices call to put us down
don't simply sit and wear a frown
stand you fool and voice your mind
you'll be knocked in turn and in kind.
You must stand tall at all cost
and for sure you will be lost
unless this cost becomes a friend;
becoming is beginning but also end.
Criticisms come in constant flow
and do not end just cos you show
them for the sickness that they are,
again and again brushes tar.

You are weak you little freak
who sits there and who cannot seek
the strength within that is knowing
that the source is you and always flowing

The source is YOU

and ALL WAYS.

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 12:23 am
by Arising_uk
Not bad. Morose and self-pitying but not bad.

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 12:54 am
by Psychonaut
Morose and self-pitying?

:lol:

Its the polar opposite.

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:08 am
by Arising_uk
Not yours to decide I assume?

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 5:50 pm
by Psychonaut
It is up to you how you interpret how the poem speaks to you for sure, but to say that it is 'self-pitying' seems to be an interpretation of how it speaks from me.

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:32 pm
by duszek
Maybe if this poem was accompanied by some music then we would get more of its message and of the feelings behind it.
Would the melody of "Hope of deliverance from the darkness that surrounds us" fit ?

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 1:03 am
by Arising_uk
Psychonaut wrote:It is up to you how you interpret how the poem speaks to you for sure, but to say that it is 'self-pitying' seems to be an interpretation of how it speaks from me.
Ah! I'm sorry. It was more a description of the initial reflective thoughts I had about what I experienced when reading the words aloud as poetry, so more a reflection upon me I guess.

Like I've said, ethics and aesthetics leave me cold, but I liked how this one sounded said.

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:41 am
by Launt
Psychonaut.
Bloody Good,
I'm impressed.

Regards

Launt

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 11:41 pm
by mhoraine
All Ways

Can we have it another way - like whot Goethe might have podcast : Mignon

http://www2.warwick.ac.uk/fac/arts/germ ... odcasts/26

Sometime you just gotta hear it - the little song ? - to sense it.....then again, sometimes you don't....

M.

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 11:59 pm
by mhoraine
and there are the moving pics....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NXPRtwa1 ... re=related

so, now we got to see and hear the words and some kind of picture ? but not the scent....
* scratch and sniff * poetry ?

My first in the Poetry Bin - At A Loss

Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:29 pm
by Aetixintro
Title: At a Loss

You have always looked so good in blue

The sun shining at you so sweet

You always have seemed to understand the light beams

Let me kiss you

I think you're so neat

But now you have gone away

I have lost you

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 2:49 pm
by Psychonaut
Anyone particular in mind Aetix?

Re: Poetry Bin

Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 7:38 pm
by Aetixintro
Nah, not really... Just some stuff...