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Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2020 7:07 pm
by commonsense
Walker wrote: Thu Nov 19, 2020 5:38 pm There was young grifter from Scranton

A bully whose greed was wanton

He twisted the truth for wealth

And when his mind lost its health

He found that his integrity was gone.
Not a limerick in meter nor rhyme. Were you overcome with jealousy, wrath or hyperbole?

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2020 7:29 pm
by commonsense
There once was a man from Manhattan
Whose opponents he wanted to flatten.
He thought he could win
And hide every sin,
If his lawyers would only speak Latin.

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2020 7:29 pm
by Walker
Not a limerick in meter nor rhyme. Were you overcome with jealousy, wrath or hyperbole?
Poetic license meets projection.

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2020 8:00 pm
by Walker
Poetic license met projection

When resentment pointed the direction

The motives of all

Were labeled banal

When the dancer mollassed her diction.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dyqaa6BX7HY
:lol:

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2020 8:15 pm
by Walker
This rolls more limericky. Better word for wanton?

*

There was young grifter from Scranton

A bully whose greed was wanton

He twisted truth for wealth

And when his mind lost its health

He found his integrity had gone on.

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2020 1:32 am
by attofishpi
There was a fat man called Trump
that intelligent people saw as a Chump
when he took office
he made friends with Boris
and sent flowers to him
via a florist.

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2020 1:41 am
by commonsense
Gasp!

The rhyme scheme is a-a-b-b-a.

The rhythm goes 3-3-2-2-3.

Unless you want to take license with the limerick form.

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2020 1:44 am
by attofishpi
commonsense wrote: Fri Nov 20, 2020 1:41 am Gasp!

The rhyme scheme is a-a-b-b-a.

The rhythm goes 3-3-2-2-3.

Unless you want to take license with the limerick form.
Bah! Limerick police! ..it was close enough, go pick on Walker.

..edited - (a bit better)

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2020 1:59 am
by commonsense
attofishpi wrote: Fri Nov 20, 2020 1:44 am
commonsense wrote: Fri Nov 20, 2020 1:41 am Gasp!

The rhyme scheme is a-a-b-b-a.

The rhythm goes 3-3-2-2-3.

Unless you want to take license with the limerick form.
Bah! Limerick police! ..it was close enough, go pick on Walker.

..edited - (a bit better)
:lol:

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2020 12:47 am
by gaffo
duszek wrote: Thu Nov 19, 2020 11:43 am Thanks for your nice contributions, attofishpi and commonsense. :D

gaffo
Some good solution needs to be found somehow.
I don´t have one but if well-intentioned people relax and forward peace maybe a solution will occurr to someone.
all was peace with the UK in the EU, now that the UK is no longer - not so easy.

only two solutions - per refuerdum = and assuming the vote to to leave the UK in NI - peace.

or no reforendum. or reforedum to remain in the UK by the NI people. then a Wall/border - as it was from the 1960's to 1998.

its that simple.

there are no other options at this point, Brexit removes any other options. this is just simple fact/logic.

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Sat Nov 28, 2020 8:08 am
by attofishpi
There was a man from Brazil
who ate a dynamite pill
his belly retired
his bum backfired
and his willy shot over the hill.

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2020 12:29 am
by Walker
A feisty old man named Magoo
Took a walk with only one shoe
When the dog asked him why
He said, I cannot lie
I just do what I gotta do.

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2020 9:56 pm
by Walker
After the dog did his do in the grass
He said to the man, you’ve got brass
This yard is my house
You do in your house
But first, better bag up that mass.

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2020 11:25 pm
by Walker
Magoo said, I gotta find my shoe
They’re my only pair and brand new
Dog said, I’ll save you some time
It’s buried back under that pine
Where the grass is still damp from the dew.

Re: Irish Pub

Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2020 11:33 pm
by commonsense
Those are clever ones, Walker.