Re: Sisyphus Revisited
Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2013 8:33 pm
I said don't take my word for it...do what Voice of Time said, which is...urm...exactly what I said.
VOT wrote:
VOT wrote:
Aiddon wrote:your example, which lacks a bit of engagement with the audience, you are focusing too much on the text itself
.Is it possible to be more brief? That might engage people better