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Re: Sisyphus Revisited

Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2013 8:33 pm
by aiddon
I said don't take my word for it...do what Voice of Time said, which is...urm...exactly what I said.

VOT wrote:
your example, which lacks a bit of engagement with the audience, you are focusing too much on the text itself
Aiddon wrote:
Is it possible to be more brief? That might engage people better
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